The Cry of the Fish Eagle by Peter Rimmer

41--IxOYqWL           This would be more like the cry for an editor.    *

I had been asked to review this book and a story about Africa sounded intriguing so I bought it for my kindle. Unfortunately I could not finish it. While the story is interesting the writing is so convoluted and disjointed it was almost impossible to follow who was who and exactly what was happening. The passion of the author for his subject does come through but gets overshadowed by the lack of editing. A rewrite with better transitions would make this a readable and enjoyable book.

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